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Simple, clean art and good animation. I like it.

The biggest issue with this is that the framerate is too low to get any sense of motion. It almost feels like watching a slideshow. If you're thinking of making more of these, you should really consider shooting at a faster framerate.

thecrookedarmkid responds:

i apreciate the feedback. this was a first try at stopmotion for me

The presentation is excellent. The animation is very impressive, and overall it's fun to look at. My one complaint is the length. It seemed like there was more that could've been done with this (very relatable) concept. Definitely makes me want to check out your other stuff, though.

Recent Game Reviews

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All right, before I get started with this, I just want to say that I think making a game based around the struggles transgendered people face is great. It's a concept you don't see too often. So I'll give you props for that.

With that said, I don't think the concept was executed well. In fact, at first I wondered if this was satire, because it actually seemed to be REINFORCING negative stereotypes of transgendered people, and social justice bloggers in particular (obsession with pronouns, for one, not to mention "Cisbot"... without reading the disclaimer in the description, that could easily be taken the wrong way). Instead of trying to communicate what trans people have to go through on a daily basis, which is what I expected, it felt like a guide on how not to be offensive. Unless the player is taking notes, I don't think it's going to have much of an impact on anyone.

As for the game itself, it's your average vertical shooter, with the main gimmick being that you're shooting and collecting words instead of more generic objects, like ships and powerups. It actually plays pretty well. My issue is that it feels like the game exists solely to drive the message, resulting in a somewhat barebones experience. Also, I don't understand the artstyle. What does imitating a Game Boy add to the game? Not much, really. It's just sort of... there.

Overall, this could've been thought out better. The concept is good, but there are some serious flaws in the execution.

VOEC responds:

A fair review. Thank you. I wnat to comment on a view things though.

You're right that the game could have been a lot better designed and the are major flaws with its gameplay and story. It could have been also a bit broader at shoing the player how it is to be transgender.
But I still think that there was some interesting value in the original idea from the tumblr-post. Because being misgendered and insulted is a thing that trans people have to go through on a daily basis. I've seen lots of my friends get shit like this every day. I think it's an important part about being transgender.
(But in case you're interested in a game that really shows what transgender people have to go through in their lifes I recommend Dys4ria from Anna Anthropy, also here on Newgrounds, if you haven't played it yet)

Regarding the artstyle. I choose it because it is simple and quick. I could have made it black and white or Atari-like, but I like the colors of the Gameboy. 4 shades, pretty easy. And honestly I didn't want to spend a lot of time on the graphics, since I was just trying out this idea, and wanted to get back on working on my "proper" game-projects.

The game itself Is challenging and actually quite fun, but I felt a little... um... violated by the end.

This is surprisingly fun to play with. The ball itself could use some colour to stand out from the background, though.

Also, what's with the reset button? All it seems to do is break the game.

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YOU CALLED HIM STEVIE WUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNDDDDDER

Holy shit man, your music never fails to impress! I don't know how you get your tone, but don't change it. The only thing that would make this better is if it had some more of your trademark leads in it... hint hint. Keep it up!

Sounds like something from a movie soundtrack. Really nice, especially the drums.

Recent Art Reviews

2 Art Reviews

Looks great

Quite realistic, and love the reflections on the ball!

<deleted> responds:

Hehe, it's got quite some refractive effects, yeah :D Thanks

Name That Fetish!

Well drawn, but I have to wonder: how the hell does one hold in a shit like that so long? More importantly, why?

Yeah... not at all my kind of thing, but still a fine drawing.

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